Wednesday, October 1, 2014
Daily Mail Sports September 30, 2014
The first thing that caught my eye on the front
page was the story the story that grabs the readers’ attention first, has a
dull and confusing headline. There story below that one, “Bowen gets shot to
lead Kansas” should not lead with those first three words on a line because
people may be more concerned about Bowen getting shot especially with his
picture right about the headline. On another note, a very interesting story is
on the front page and the picture of the young man is perfect to go with the
story. There is a quote in the story, “It was scary,” is unnecessary. Of course
a car accident would be scary. He does not need to tell us that.
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