This
is the first section I found a grammar mistake and it was on the front page.
Although it was minor, most people would catch it if they read that particular
story. The writer put the word “an’ when it should have been “and.” Marshall
football takes the front page acceptably since the story is very newsworthy to
the sports readers around this area. There is a not a lot of copy and the
stories seem shorter than usual. The cutlines are visible as well as the
pictures. Surprisingly, the headlines do not leave much space, which is
different than the past. The headline for the big story could be bigger to show
how newsworthy it is. I found another punctuation mistake on the second page
where there should be a comma. The headlines on the second page do not fit the
layout well. There could have been more done to make the headlines fit with the
copy and the pictures better to make it more readable.
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