Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Proust Interview Questions with My Answers

What is your most marked characteristic?
I often put others first but sometimes more than I should.


What is the quality you most like in a man?
His smile and hardworking ambition.


What is the quality you most like in a woman?
How caring and nurturing she can be.


What do you most value in your friends?
The way they put others first and are constantly there for one another.


What is the trait you most deplore in yourself?
How shy I can become during certain situations.


What is your favorite occupation?
Writing about things that will teach others.


What is your idea of perfect happiness?
Knowing that I am loved and that I have something and someone to admire and being perfectly content with just writing.


What do you regard as the lowest depth of misery?
Losing my grandmother, one of my favorite people, to cancer.


In which country would you like to live?
In the United States where freedom is still growing.


Who are your favorite writers?
Nicholas Sparks and John Green


Who are your favorite poets?
I do not have any.


Who is your favorite hero of fiction?
Superman.


Who is your favorite heroine of fiction?
Wonder Woman.


Who are your favorite composers?
I do not have any favorite composers.


Who are your favorite painters?
Vincent Van Gogh


What are your favorite names?
Violet and Kodi


What is it that you most dislike?
How hateful people can be.


Which talent would you most like to have?
I would love to be talented enough to be a Dallas Cowboys Cheerleader.


How would you like to die?
Knowing that I accomplished all of my goals and changed, at least, someone’s world.


What is your current state of mind?
Content, but stressed about school and my future.


What is your motto?
No matter what, keep moving forward.

Tuesday, November 4, 2014

LAST Critique of Charleston Daily Mail Sports


WVU’s football team fought a hard battle against TCU and any story that comes from that game is newsworthy enough to be on the front page of the Charleston Daily Mail. That story makes the entire front page and the entire section because it will get, even Marshall fans, to read what’s inside. The headline, however, has too much space and even though it seems to be a daily mail habit, it still does not fit the layout well from a readers’ point of view. This section is different because there are more wire stories than usual and one of the stories does not have a byline. There are no grammar mistakes that I have found this week. The stories are filled with quality information and they are definitely of the public interest.

Thursday, October 30, 2014

Charleston Daily Mail Sports October 28

This is the first section I found a grammar mistake and it was on the front page. Although it was minor, most people would catch it if they read that particular story. The writer put the word “an’ when it should have been “and.” Marshall football takes the front page acceptably since the story is very newsworthy to the sports readers around this area. There is a not a lot of copy and the stories seem shorter than usual. The cutlines are visible as well as the pictures. Surprisingly, the headlines do not leave much space, which is different than the past. The headline for the big story could be bigger to show how newsworthy it is. I found another punctuation mistake on the second page where there should be a comma. The headlines on the second page do not fit the layout well. There could have been more done to make the headlines fit with the copy and the pictures better to make it more readable. 

Thursday, October 23, 2014

Charleston Daily Mail Sports October 21


There are multiple quotes in this week’s section that are unnecessary because they could easily be paraphrased. One quote from Doc Holliday goes with what the headline title is and that is the only one that seems acceptable in that story. Another quote “I don’t think we’re going to have to convince our kids that these guys can play,” does not tell the reader much and will not make sense to the reader. Overall this section is laid out well as far as newsworthiness goes. There are big news stories on the front page and stories about high school sports on the inside. However, the big headline story does not have a big enough headline. It is hard to tell what the big story is here. The pictures have great quality and really tell a different side or a more visual side to the stories that the writers are telling.

Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Charleston Daily Mail Sports Section Critique October 14


I have noticed Marshall University football is starting to become more popular in this newspaper’s sports section. The Herd is doing well and has continued the same winning streak, are the games really that newsworthy at this point? Like I have previously mentioned, the headlines have extra, unnecessary space. There is a lot of copy on the front page but the stories have good, informative quality. The pictures are clear and printed nicely like they usually are. The whole inside of the second and third page seem crammed and there needs to be more space between each line of the copy. Straining the readers’ eyes is not something that is going to make them keep want to keep reading.