Thursday, January 15, 2015

State of the Union Predictions Column

Topic Predictions for Obama’s 2015 State of the Union Address
America knows President Obama is busy during this time of year planning to present topics for the 2015 State of the Union Address. What everyone does not know is what topics are going to make the cut.
In the past Obama has shown a great deal of certainty about the future of America when it comes to the U.S. economy and education across the country. During his first term, Obama focused his energy on health care and education and as time went on, he focused on immigration and oil.
Last year the biggest topic that stuck with me, as an American Citizen was income inequality. He painted a broad picture of a country where everyone is equal no matter what class you fall under. He mentioned women in the workforce in comparison to men and the income gap between the upper and middle classes.
Equality was a main topic of education as well and Obama pushed towards equal opportunity for every student. Using these previous topics in previous addresses, several predictions for the 2015 State of the Union Address have come to mind.
Obama has touched on education in different ways such as student loans and grants and equal opportunities when it comes to furthering education. There have been rumors, recently, about furthering equal opportunity for everyone who wants it. Obama wants to see to it that students get the first two years of community college free for everyone who is willing to work for it and as a college student, that is a major topic of discussion.
So far there are only a few details on the proposal and because Obama has been big on education since day one, there is a good chance this will be a topic in this years address.
On Monday the president brought up something new that seems like a candidate for the address this year. According to NPR, Obama said he wants the federal government to do more to prevent cyber attacks; but not just any cyber attacks, he wants the American children to be protected while using data that is collected at schools.
He wants Congress to pass a law that prevents software companies from selling data to students and from using it to create targeted ads.
“If we’re going to be connected, then we need to be protected,” Obama stated Monday.
He recently took a stand on technological advances in other directions as well. For example, he believes the age of technology is making America vulnerable.
With this in mind, he wants to push the Personal Data Notification and Protection Act which would require companies to do a little more work and let customers know when their accounts have been hacked. This is a time consuming process and states have a different policy when it comes to their customers and hacking. Obama wants to make it a nationwide law, which is big a deal and could be a state of the union deal.
Income equality is another major topic that is predicted to be discussed due to the previous address. Especially since minimum wage prices have changed across the country and the country is still in a deep whole when it comes to incomes in the middle class.

It is always interesting to see what the president has to say about important issues and it will be even more interesting to see if these predictions are correct. Obama’s opinions and answers to the nation’s controversies are laid out on the line on Jan. 20, 2015 and as citizens, it is our duty to watch and listen.

Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Proust Interview Questions with My Answers

What is your most marked characteristic?
I often put others first but sometimes more than I should.


What is the quality you most like in a man?
His smile and hardworking ambition.


What is the quality you most like in a woman?
How caring and nurturing she can be.


What do you most value in your friends?
The way they put others first and are constantly there for one another.


What is the trait you most deplore in yourself?
How shy I can become during certain situations.


What is your favorite occupation?
Writing about things that will teach others.


What is your idea of perfect happiness?
Knowing that I am loved and that I have something and someone to admire and being perfectly content with just writing.


What do you regard as the lowest depth of misery?
Losing my grandmother, one of my favorite people, to cancer.


In which country would you like to live?
In the United States where freedom is still growing.


Who are your favorite writers?
Nicholas Sparks and John Green


Who are your favorite poets?
I do not have any.


Who is your favorite hero of fiction?
Superman.


Who is your favorite heroine of fiction?
Wonder Woman.


Who are your favorite composers?
I do not have any favorite composers.


Who are your favorite painters?
Vincent Van Gogh


What are your favorite names?
Violet and Kodi


What is it that you most dislike?
How hateful people can be.


Which talent would you most like to have?
I would love to be talented enough to be a Dallas Cowboys Cheerleader.


How would you like to die?
Knowing that I accomplished all of my goals and changed, at least, someone’s world.


What is your current state of mind?
Content, but stressed about school and my future.


What is your motto?
No matter what, keep moving forward.

Tuesday, November 4, 2014

LAST Critique of Charleston Daily Mail Sports


WVU’s football team fought a hard battle against TCU and any story that comes from that game is newsworthy enough to be on the front page of the Charleston Daily Mail. That story makes the entire front page and the entire section because it will get, even Marshall fans, to read what’s inside. The headline, however, has too much space and even though it seems to be a daily mail habit, it still does not fit the layout well from a readers’ point of view. This section is different because there are more wire stories than usual and one of the stories does not have a byline. There are no grammar mistakes that I have found this week. The stories are filled with quality information and they are definitely of the public interest.

Thursday, October 30, 2014

Charleston Daily Mail Sports October 28

This is the first section I found a grammar mistake and it was on the front page. Although it was minor, most people would catch it if they read that particular story. The writer put the word “an’ when it should have been “and.” Marshall football takes the front page acceptably since the story is very newsworthy to the sports readers around this area. There is a not a lot of copy and the stories seem shorter than usual. The cutlines are visible as well as the pictures. Surprisingly, the headlines do not leave much space, which is different than the past. The headline for the big story could be bigger to show how newsworthy it is. I found another punctuation mistake on the second page where there should be a comma. The headlines on the second page do not fit the layout well. There could have been more done to make the headlines fit with the copy and the pictures better to make it more readable. 

Thursday, October 23, 2014

Charleston Daily Mail Sports October 21


There are multiple quotes in this week’s section that are unnecessary because they could easily be paraphrased. One quote from Doc Holliday goes with what the headline title is and that is the only one that seems acceptable in that story. Another quote “I don’t think we’re going to have to convince our kids that these guys can play,” does not tell the reader much and will not make sense to the reader. Overall this section is laid out well as far as newsworthiness goes. There are big news stories on the front page and stories about high school sports on the inside. However, the big headline story does not have a big enough headline. It is hard to tell what the big story is here. The pictures have great quality and really tell a different side or a more visual side to the stories that the writers are telling.